All Comments on 'Grimoire Ch. 09'

Read the whole thing all 9 parts, just could not tear myself away.

I loved the mix of sensuality and otherworldly tid bits :)

I can't wait for the next submission.

By far one of my fav lit writers.

By the way did you intentionally borrow the look of a Hindu God?

If not do be careful if you plan to main stream this in any way, the Hindu community can be a bit how do I put this nicely...? Catty I suppose will have to suffice.

Belive me I have taken a lot of flack over the years for my portrayals of Hindu religious figures.

Other than that I see a well written story, I admit I tended to re word some of the more graphic portions in my mind but I am a bit of a purde ;)

Perfering the tamer wordings to the ones seen here.