by TwistedPlayr
It was different ,I thought the mother-in-law would be like most and would torture him, surpise! are there going to be more parts?
Man it was a good stgry. Pay NO attention to critics who can't even leave a name so you can at least go and see their credentials (writing ability). It was good and I enjoyed it, was hoping he got his dick inside his wife's mom but it's your story and I enjoyed it.
I love the way you play with the senses in this story! The bondage is light yet riveting, and it made Karen's session powerfully erotic. Great story!
I love the way you play with the senses in this story! The bondage is light yet riveting, and it made Karen's session powerfully erotic. Great story!
As Jake felt his mother in law pull the cord tight around his balls, he gave a might jerk, freeing his hands. He reached up wrapping his hands around her throat. "Let go, Bitch, or you die" he roared. As Karen struggled for oxygen, she let go of the string. Shoving her off of him, Jake bounded to his feet. Grabbing her by an arm and with a handful of her hair he frog marched her naked to the front door. As he shoved her naked onto the front lawn, he slammed the front door. "And stay out bitch and take your daughter with you if she had any part in this." For Jake was no wimp.
PUT THIS TRASH IN BSDM WHERE IT GOES. I welcome a reply from the "author."
Not only is your grammar rubbish you write too fast and miss out words .
'He couldn't get way.' You mean away?
'Patty told me like juice.' You missed out you. You like juice.
Slow down and read over the story several times before posting next time.
It got to be unreadable guessing what you were trying to say.
That comment about bad grammar, etc. must have been made by someone with no sex drive. I enjoyed your story too much to notice. It just made me want to eat pussy.