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Girl On A Swing

bySander Roscoe Wolff©
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by Syndra Lynn05/04/05

great subject

and the bit you gave us was well written. I love:

Small hands hold on as,
with each kick of her bare legs,
she inches ever higher

But I expected more. You could have made us feel more. You are a good writer but I feel like you stopped befor you got started.

Write on

~Syn

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