by LuciousBi-Writes4U
"it seems never stopping"
wow how true...loved this one it was cute and quirky yet oh so true and all said in an easy playful manner!
I loved this poems flow and tempo (that's not a car)
This poems structure is sound and the almost melody like read is excellent, a pearl of a poem.
Superfabulapulous, great word, the kind that bounces out of one's mouth like dribbled basketball. Nice work Lucious.
touch..I love the soft rain and I could almost see the raindrops falling as I read your poem.
touch..I love the soft rain and I could almost see the raindrops falling as I read your poem.