All Comments on 'White Biker Gangbang Ch. 01'

I was ready to give you a hundred and nothing but praise, but---you stopped the damned story like you were double-parked. Just when you were in a good position to expand, you got lost. You seem to have talent so deliver what you promise.

You get one all worked up and then poof. Better finish it as it is good so far, but not finished. Enjoyable though.

... it looked like the story was just stopped in mid thought. You had it going pretty well, except for the switch from worried wife to shameless slut, and then it looked like you said, "I can't go over 1,600 words, better stop here."

when do we get the next part of the story

It is a great lead in, but it very unfinished, It seems to me the gang should have there way with the 2 hotties. The husbands can help or be tied up and watch the girls have the time of there life. Thanks and let me know if you finish it please.