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Well done and very touching
Don't pay attention to those rude people. Your story was great and I will surely read more of what you write. Thank you. I had the pleasure of meeting and marrying my wife, she 39, me 22, it's sad that you couldn't expereince the pleasure in your life that we have shared for over 26 years, she now 65 and me 48, age has made no difference, it's all about how you feel
Tell us more!
Please tell us more about the women and her daughter and your experience with MJ. Love the way you write.
GREAT JOB
Keep up the great job. I think that you do a fanstic job of writing.Keep writing so I can enjoy you stories. THANKS
Great stories
My wife and I are in our 50's. We have read one story a night for the past week. We loved every story, every word. You write very well and you have kept us aroused. I hope you continue writing and keep giving us these wonderful sexy tales.
Mr Greenjeans
What a sweet story!
I found your evident sincerity and appreciation for a natural woman to be very affecting, especially because my lover has exactly your fetish. I can tell you that this unusual desire of his makes me feel very beautiful and sexy.
I like your writing quite a lot; the only reason I don't give you a top score is that your grammar errors bother me a little. I'm not exactly a snob, but I find them distracting. You might want to have a literate friend proofread your stories for you to avoid this.
Mom's Friend was My First Love Ch. 07
I found your story to be quite beautiful and very well written and sincerely hope you continue writing.
One Hell of a read
backwoodsman:
I thought I had read this but the story in my folder with almost the same title as yours (Different story line) is by a another author.
I voted as I read each chapter, but I withheld my comments for the end. You have a rare talent, friend. You're articulate and are able to put pen to paper (so to speak) and tell a story so that it flows. Your style makes for a relaxed, delightful, easy read. Thank you for the wonderful story. Ronnie W.
Great and Bittersweet
I have very much enjoyed these stories. I like the detail you use, the sensual language. Thanks for sharing. It's a bittersweet ending, though. Sigh.
Watch
You do well, but they could be better with more attention to the mechanics of good writing and gramatical rules.
Thanx.
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I grew up country and some of my greatest memories are those envolving older ladies of the grange. Thank you for making me smile and relive those wonderful times.
Great story
That story was great. I have been reading since the first one and it has just been awesome the whole way through. I can't wait to read your story about MJ and you. If it's anything like your previous work, it'll be great. Keep up the good work.
WOW!!
Great story, lots of good erotic writing but much insight into the characters too, they come alive!
Wonderful Story
What a wonderful story.... bittersweet, poignant, utterly believable.
Hats off man!!
It's a grt story.....one of d bst I evr read..KEEP WRITING!!
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