by Fillmore
wonderful story I really liked it a lot, althought I doubt most doms would learn how to Dom that quick but some do learn faster than others. A great story.
I have read this story for the third time up to chapter 18 and it will twice for chapter 19 when I get there.
Keep up the good work!!
I think that was the most ideal erotic short story I have ever read. Perfect. Thank you.
That was perfect. Emotionally, psychologically, physically, perfect.
Thank you.
well written and just the right amount of everything...im so excited to have found this story, i hate to break away from it to go to work dang it but...off i shall go*sigh*...please keep up the excellent work while i catch up with this so far wonderful and erotic and so well written no bullshit story...just what seems to be a wonderful love story between Master and slave. Thank you for allowing us to read you. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
Wow. I girl that I'm looking to begin a relationship with asked me to read this. I never knew what this world was like, but I am starting to understand it. Keep them coming. Great story.
Um.. that was really weird. Well done on originality though. Just not my kind of story. I probably shouldn't have commented.. lol.
I wasnt really expecting that kind of story since all the other chapters are listed as romance nevertheless i enjoyed it just the same. Here's to you.
I wasn't really expecting that kind of story since all the other chapters are listed as EC nevertheless i enjoyed it just the same. Here's to you.
well written but a little too unrealistic eg how quickly Harry becomes a consumate Master from presumably no previous experience
This story is so well written and so endearing, I can't understand anyone ever giving it anything less than a 5.
However, it is not only concluded but even continued in a sequel at:
http://storiesonline.net/a/Fillmore
You're welcome :)