All Comments on 'You Are Mine'

i hope this is continued

Hey, what an arousing story - come to me, babe, I will make your fantasy come true - but only if you write more. How about some more from her point of view? How about actually getting down to pleasuring her?

Miranda

More please!

You stopped too soon and left your readers wanting more and it's been several years since you wrote this

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Not really. I like a man that teases, that brings to mind a certain scenario and then builds upon it, like an artist. One more brush stroke here, a little emphasis there, and a beautiful picture is beginning to emerge.

Now, get out those brushes again, and paint ME into your next scene!

~Tori

As my best friend, and most intoxicating lover, often says - "always leave them wanting more"... very well done.

Wow! The ultimate fantasy of seduction... and self control.