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18, Dumb & Wanting Cum Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/26/05

What took you so long????

Hope it isn't 8 months 'til the next chapter....
mighty fine story so far....

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by Anonymous07/11/06

/wanting

Great and hope you continue getting her in deeper.

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by Anonymous07/24/07

Good Job

very hot. to bad you didn't keep going with it. Thats why you only got 75% instead of 100%. Take another look and see if you might come up with one ot two more chapters.

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by Anonymous09/24/07

Um.

It was pretty good, really hot. Is it strange for a girl to find cock sucking so enjoyable? I certainly like it.

My only issue is the degrading of the spelling and grammar more around the end. You kept referring to her as Louis(guy's name), putting 'where' instead of 'were', and the one that bothered me the most, 'red' instead of 'read'. I would've enjoyed the story a lot more if I didn't have to struggle to understand why they were talking about colors.

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by Anonymous02/25/08

Too bad you stopped...

That was great. I've never really been into control, but I quite enjoyed that story.

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by Anonymous02/25/09

awwwwww

i loved it sooooooo much but the fact that you stopped right there.....when it was getting good burned my heart. i was getting so turned on to masterbate. u crushed me dude

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by Anonymous05/16/09

awsum

ur story rokd my soks i wish that i had louise in my bed to be my slut

www.whycindywhy.com/?id=ndo6o5xvgk0pbgn8jz ukxjz6v20w0w

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by Anonymous11/12/09

please make another chapter

very interesting...cliff hanger at the end I need to know what happens to her next! First chapter story I read...

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by Anonymous02/18/10

can u putr big boob pics

picz

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by Anonymous04/17/10

My milkshake brings all the boys to the yard, and damn right, its better than urs

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by Anonymous11/26/10

???

who starts licking jeans? Then half the bj was through the boxers...which apparently never came off? Did she remember to pull it out of the boxers? have you ever got a bj in real life?

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by Anonymous12/17/10

hahaha

how baggy were his boxers jesus she deep throated him with them on? please

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