All Comments on 'Not Strong Enough'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A bit lighter here,

a message of wistful hope;

Deanna, you're evolving quite nicely.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Sweet

Wanting something more,

they both refused to see,

what lay before the others,

each bound by destiny.

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I love these lines. Just wistfull and sad.

I feel this all the way through.

Huggs to ya my friend and

More Please ~

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wheels within wheels

DC:

Past= hurt? Rejection?

Present= Fear? Uncertainty?

Future=?

Wheels within wheels and so it goes, or does it?

Thank You. Ronnie W.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
RHYMERS TO CHEATEE's

who lets it continue. TK U MLJ LV NV

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