All Comments on 'Just Once'

by lostandfounder

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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technical save on the cliches - the ending. My god it is good to see you back.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
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Your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey....Art~

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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What a fun end, after reflecting on a man's hard head...

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