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All Comments on 'Smoke Away, Give Away'

by LuciousBi-Writes4U

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good but too short

Smoke Away was a very good story but it was far too short. I hope that you continue with and expand this story.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
So Much Fun

And on top of everything, she also quit smoking...cigarettes.

lol,bd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
next chapters...

can't wait to see what 'ol Doc will do with Sarah and who else he'll get into the mix...

great start now...MORE....MORE.....MORE!! ;)

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
Dr. Heckle and Mr. Pride

I too will watch to see what the Dr. does <grin> I swear I just knew this would end with two lovers laying in bed after sex and then having a smoke <grin> Your on a roll, roll out the next chapter please!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 18 years ago
Fun And interesting story--arousing too!

Great little story---It's got me excited and wanting more!

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