All Comments on 'Never Forgotten Graduation Party'

But when I'd finished I felt I knew nothing about the people and cared less then nothing about them. That's fine for a lot of people, But not most of the romance readers.

I really don't see much romance in this story. Lots of lust though. Maybe it should have been in the erotic catagory.

You seem to be able to express yourself very well in print and I'd like to see you write a story that let me feel more then this. Desire, pain, joy along with the lust.

I hope I'm not being to hard on you as I plan on looking for more (and better) storys form you. I think you can do it.