All Comments on 'I Want To Run (Version 2)'

An improvement. I still think there is not total clarity of meaning (except to the "you" that you write to. That person would understand it quite well, I think) for the reader. But it is tighter than it was, and the phrasing is crisp for the most part.

your poem was mentioned on the thread, New Poems Reviews

Oh, this is good, WSO. Love those ending lines. The poem flowed wonderfully!

I like the way it runs like a green line across the monitor! Well done, Sweetie!

Fly

I love these lines:

like the wooden boards

on an empty wine barrel

I'm adding wine barrel to my must-use list. :)