All Comments on 'Dollhouse Wedding'

by firemaker8888

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice

Would loooove to hear YOU CUMming!

ekersenekersenover 18 years ago
Wonderful!!

What a great, sweet story!! As an old guy myself, I share the excitement of the young ladies. I loved it that Lois spoke seductive things and took innitiative. Your narrator was a lucky man!!

MINKXMINKXover 18 years ago
Oh very nice...

This was probably one of the most charming, softly sexy stories I have ever read on Lit...and I'm a voracious reader so I've made my way through a lot. Just delightful. Thanks. I'm going straight back to see...hoping...if you have any other offerings. Once again, wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Lecherous

One imagines what one might do at the next wedding. Brings up the lecherous old man in me, it does.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
just what I want

delightful turn of phrase, good delivery - give us more.

Gus AsparGus Asparabout 18 years ago
my favourite fantasy

An old man seduced by a sexy young woman... my favourite fantasy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Thanks

I loved being that girl before I married. Thanks for the memories.

Shae

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

wonderful! it is so hard to find oldermen/younger women fantasies that are sweet and gentle like this one. A real treat. Please write more! and read them too. you have a lovely voice.

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