All Comments on 'Lust and Longing'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sex in an Elevator--Such a brilliant theme

Shows such imagination--Never been done by anyone else--------------------today.

pagrlpagrlabout 18 years agoAuthor
So it wasn't a novel place; it was still fun

Hi, I've noticed that no one is leaving comments. Please don't let the guy who thought having sex in an elevator was no fun just because it's been done before. The lack of novelty in the setting didnt make it any less fun when it happened. Personally, having some strange woman want to help me and my friend out was more exciting to me than the fact that we were in public with the stupid elevator alarm blaring.

So, again, I beg you to tell me if you like it. This way I'll know if I should write about things that actually happened or if I should just let me imagination runaway with me.

Thanks all who've voted!

carbinemastercarbinemasteralmost 12 years ago

Nice. I liked the heat.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

one of the best i've read :) so tender yet so hot

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