All Comments on 'The Cabin at Lake George'

by Baxter72

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Very good, but...

Nicely erotic, straightforward, and smoothly written. Not too long, right to the point.

However:

I *seem* to remember reading this story, or one verrrrry close to it, some years ago. I mean, down to the wording in some cases. Is this a case of the author submitting his own work in a new forum, outright plagiarism, or a remarkable coincidence? Or is it the déjà vu from hell?

In any event, nicely done and keep 'em coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
suggestion

While I have enjoyed your stories,several of your submissions contain the following or very similar;

1)-Now, the only thing she was wearing was a white bra and white bikini panties. Both of them looked brand new. .."2)I need to tell you at this point that I had a vasectomy ten years ago, so any form of protection won't be necessary. You can't get pregnant from me."......3)she was going away to Boston U........4)jeans and a gray sweatshirt with

"Boston University" imprinted on it.

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It be more enjoyable if it did not seem that I was reading the same story over and over.

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