All Comments on 'A Lover'

Nice sentiments - a small suggestion - break it up a bit so the reader can savor the flavor, e.g.,

A lovers' eyes

could never tell lies

unless he looks

away.

A lovers' lips

upon fingertips

could leave you

with nothing to say.

Try it out - see what you think.

And, BTW,

Welcome to Lit!

I truly do love this poem...but do take LeBroz' suggestions as to breaking up the verses...You will do well.

~Honey

I like this such a deepness of spirit in your words

I will love you a lot Sunday, Monday or whenever.