by temperanceless
Pieces written in the 2nd person are usually a "pass" for me. This is an exception, and it's exceptional. Very nice and hot.
Well written and in the FIRST person.
No spelling or grammar errors!
Write some more.
That was a great story. I hope you plan on writing more in the future. Sure worked for me...smile...
My second time to read it and it was still amazing. Left me in a heap.
My word this is both poetic and powerfully written. I can almost feel your hands on me. Simply amazing..
What a flawless job of conveying the incredible dynamics of a heated coupling between two people when they both are open and willing to test the boundaries of their sexual relationship.
I truly hope to read more from you soon.I found it pleasantly devastating.
Thank you for you story, it was wonderfully delicious and tantilizing! Hope to see more from your in the future as I'm sure they will be a treat.
Nice picture in your profile too by the way!