All Comments on 'A Birthday Surprise'

...this is one of the better versions

enjoyed reading a lesbians first dick, maybe she will get to prefer it and teri may get curious too.

great

As another of your readers has already commented, this plotline has been used many times before, but this is a great entry nonetheless. The only way you could have made it even hotter would be having Darlene walk in just as he was burying himself in Rachel, strip naked and slip her tongue into Teri's pussy,

I am so wet.

That. Was. Amazing. It was slightly predictable, of course, but very good. I laughed at the end. I hoped she would say that, or something like it anyway.

Once again you have brought us into your world and your mind? You are one of the best here.

Thank You!.

ED

pls continue

But when he tries to get his wife involved he may loose his balls.

Really enjoyed the concept, but problems do arise. Rachel and Teri should have 'ok'd his birthday present at their massage therapy visit. Despite the special day, despite that they're a lesbian couple who've decided to 'take a walk on the wild side' for a friend's birthday - he's cheating on Darlene. The girls are in a committed relationship, so there is no concern about one or the other taking him away but the fact remains. And I have to say, if I'd cheated when I was married, castration would have been on the table. Along with other medieval sports. No, as fun as it is, he has messed up - especially if Rachel approaches Darlene for a threesom with him.

Great idea for a story,what with making it a one-time birthday special. What might have been a nice twist,that would negate the "cheating on his wife" aspect,would have had his wife walking in,stripping,and joining in the action with a daisy chain while Brian was still "secretly" in the closet. (Maybe those massage sessions with the girls involved a variation of the "happy-ending".) One thing though,Teri might start to get jealous,and very possessive when she starts thinking about how much Rachel enjoyed sex with a cock, Brian's outstanding pussy-eating talent, and the friendship and strong connection they've already developed as co-workers and friends.

I've been working on my wife for a threesome this might take her to the next stage.

I love your writing, thank you,

Beautiful work without over-sexualizing. Definitely loved getting off to this one

Every guy needs a female friend like this. 5 *

I wouldn't have to take any blue pill either, 'shouldn't expect this to be more than a time thing.' huh? I wonder. I also wonder if Teri was really that shy, about being in the hot tub naked or just pretending. How about some sequels?

Fun, super hot story. Thanks!

Off to a lackluster start but it finished with a BANG! Good story, well written.

Good story, very cute, very enjoyable.

Too hot! Lots of fun. Sequel(s) might be nice. Did Brian and Darlene have an open marriage? Brian did not seem to express any concerns about his wife's feelings about his birthday present.

Mfj