All Comments on 'Business Begins: Jill's Turn'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
My, what a chilling ending.

Beautiful. Jill seemed to forget her place too easily. This had a beautiful crescendo, and ended on a deliciously cold note.

You are a beautiful writer, m'lady.

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