All Comments on 'The Naked Walk'

by oraldave39

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Not too shabby

A little abrupt... could've used some more buildup but still an enjoyable quickie. It could use a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
LOVED THE IDEA

And I agree with the previous comment, needs a little work, BUT DEFINATELY A SECOND CHAPTER. Maybe a little more desirable fuck mate and also some lezzie too?

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyalmost 18 years ago
Thanks!

Your story has been mentioned on the New Story Review Thread on Literotica's Author's Hangout forum found on the Bulletin Boards. ~ Thanks Red

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
She;s right she is a slut

and stupid enough to take a dare that could have resulted in being picked up by strangers, while her husband would laught, or catching a nice disease to give him. Hopefully she did pass on a nice STD.

birdman99birdman99almost 18 years ago
same thing happened to us

This is probably a true story the same thing happened to us in Jamaica while on vacation she took the bet lost and had to walk back to the room nude was caught by jamaican man working late night was very exciting

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinalmost 18 years ago
A nice quickie

A quick, fun read. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

docgbrowndocgbrownover 17 years ago
Very refreshing

For once a new twist. I get tired of reading how all of the men have better cocks then their husbands. I wouldn’t mind reading more stories of this ilk.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Maree Did this with Two Brother coming down a Light Up Street and I Fuck Both{One Under me & One on Top } Fucking My Pussy & Ass at he Same time ..They Both Cum inside Me..Maree ask if she do it again and they Swap Position and They Both Fuck my Pussy & Ass and Cum inside my Sloppy Pussy & Sloppy Ass..

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My stories are written with real people in mind. I embellish or fantasize to get the big “What If ?” Sometime I combine several different experiences from various people into one story. If a story sounds too real, I take that as a compliment. Only a fool would write a nonfic...