by lostinetherland
Love the concepts getting much better. Keep writing and rewriting and you will be published for sure.
This is developing into a very good story. Please tell me there is more to come. Do Gen and Carol meet?, Does Brian put in an appearance?, Does Gen get to meet Dave the Bus driver? But the star of the show seems to be the 9 inch rubber dildo!
Why is it these things never run out of batteries at that crucial time (like they do in real life?).
Please write some more
Sam Wood