All Comments on 'Under Mr. Nolan's Bed Ch. 04'

Just finished part 4 of Mr Nolan's bed. How soon does Mr Nolan fuck both girls?

...long walks in the rain and sex on Sundays

no, sorry, where was i ? Must have been distracted by your hot tale. Or Erica and Leah's hot tails.

Anyway I loved the flow from ch2 to 3 then how you tie ch 4 back to the porn under the bed. I just wish the chapters were longer.

my daughter is out of the house and nothing like this happenned with her friends! Although if she had found out she never would have forgiven me, so its just as well that it is a fantasy. Unlike the other reader, I would prefer that it not develop into incest; the edginess and excitement are better without going that far.

Love this series hot hot hot! Please tell me they get together in the next one. Could I wish for both girls to be with Mr. Nolan? Don't stop, selena, lets see where we go next.

With everyones comments but I have the same feeling as Michass about the incest. I think it would still be just as good without getting Erica involved. I'm guessing you've already written/submitted it considering how quick these have been coming up and I'm sure whatever twist you put in, it's great!

keep it up, selena

fucking hot blowjob, jesus

I absolutely adored the part where Mr. Nolan caught Leah in his room. In most stories, he would have jumped all over the 18 year old and dominated her or talked to her about how hot porn is or some such thing. Instead, your character was instantly embarrassed AND concerned that she would think that was what sex is all about. WOW! That was so freaking refreshing! Great dialogue through that part and the rest. The feelings of all characters really came through!

This was friggin hot. Also, you had me earlier in the chapter when the three teens were in the bedroom. I thought there was going to be a 3-some. But no, you had us fooled.

Each chapter surpasses the last with these two girls experimenting through their sexual awakening... with vivid detail! So well written!