All Comments on 'Yasmine's Fantasy Ch. 01'

Well-written, an excellent debut. I look forward to reading further explorations of Yasmine's blossoming sexuality, maybe even how she and her companion met in the first place. Good to have you with us.

simply, this is a fantasy of mine, also. i like the short and deliberate way each aspect of the fantasy is fulfilled. very nice. . . will definitely read more. . .

The story started out so well, but it ended so abruptly!!