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Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionover 17 years ago
nice one

this is one of my favorite poems by you. Bravo!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Nicely done Art, but feels like there are too many words {next thing you know, you'll have invigorated my slumbering muse!}.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Sight and Images

Rich in Sight and Images. Sparce but so clean and direct. A Poem for which you should be justifiable proud. A thing of beauty - lovely to read ~ then read once more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
*****

Anyone who knows me knows I enjoy simplicity and unfussiness, ergo, I enjoy this poem. Almost fugue-like.

Tess

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
simply rich

two words up!...blue

bluerainsbluerainsover 17 years ago
simply rich

two words up!...blue

TeeTeeTeeTeeover 17 years ago
Lovely...

I smiled after reading this :) Thanks for sharing.

T_T

Sissy Adele HowellsSissy Adele Howellsover 17 years ago
Simple and sweet

The innocence of a leaf. Enjoyed it so much

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