by *Snatch
Can't believe that no one has reviewed this over the last five years. The imagery was very nice but my only complaint was that there was not enough of it.
It has been years since I've enjoyed a blow job and never have I heard the pleasure so lovingly described.
Great rhyming! While my reading my cock gets hard and throbbing as if is being sucked!
I love rhyming poems and yours is nice......BUT, have someone edit before you submit. Incorrect usage detracts from the pleasure of the picutres your words paint.
Good pacing and use of rhyme, only one of which was a bit forced. You have a good ear for meter.
You poem kept the rhyme going,
even as my cock kept growing,
images of those sucking lips,
yielded dreams of cuffs and whips,
perhaps you will stop and deny me,
then turn about and even tie me,
hold my face with thigh and leg,
Don't let go until I beg.
Ride my face; there is no haste,
Let me enjoy your sweet taste.
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1971 gave her first BJ to her boss to keep her job!!
1972 gave a Greek some head before he did her ass
1973 gave an NBA star some head with ice in her mouth
1974 gave her lover head daily
1975 gave the twins Rob & Ron their birthday head
This poem inspired me to start writing erotic poetry of my own. Thank you for your the vivid images and steady rhyme structure. The poem gets me hard by the ending makes me lose it every time.