A beautiful rendering filled with excellent metaphors. Your beautiful magic words poignant and delicate seemed pluck right out of empty air and dropped into place. Beautiful Poem.
Nicely done piece with this emotional storm and the discovery of who's playing what role in the midst of the turmoil.
no matter the tortous course or path, TK U MLJ LV NV
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