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Love Is Necessary

byLady_Blackhawk©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/02/07

True....

With each line written, I can feel each pain that love does bring in the end.
Very true words here, for Love is Necessary.

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by LeBroz01/02/07

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Just a suggestion, but it might have even greater impact if it were about half its length; pull out those lines with lesser impact and those that remain will cut even deeper. Play with it a bit and see what you think.

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by Amyfriend01/26/07

Anger..

and pain..make me finally realize that "Love is Necessary"

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