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Mercy For Death

byMiddiMedici©
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by Anonymous01/19/07

pretty cool

nice I liked it

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by Anonymous01/20/07

I love your story

Please finish it!!!

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by dreamcatcher701/20/07

so good

I am loving this and need to read more and soon, so please please can we have more.

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by pandora403701/25/07

Lovely, but too short

I think you should give her a chance to live. Only 16 and already she has experienced so much despair and hopelessness. If turned she would have a chance to live her life even in death. But also she is still young enough to have hope, so if she died she would be redeemed.

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by Anonymous10/07/07

Please!

Write more!!!

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by Anonymous01/02/08

More!!!!!!!

Geave her a chanins I think she wheel bring lite in to his life(figertivly ofcors)And make his life bairab.

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by Anonymous08/27/11

That was very intense

I love it. Not many people can pull off having a story up here that has absolutely no sex but is still very Heart racing.Although as the story progresses it seems like ti will be more of a romance the only thing being NON-Human about it being that he is a Vampire but still a very wonderful work of art!!!!!

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