All Comments on 'The Sales Associate Ch. 10'

An OK story, but I would've preferred to read more of Hard Body Shop Clerk. I felt this one didn't have too much of a plot, and relied too much on how bad a guy the boss was. Holly was supposed to be the "bait" in their sales pitches, but the story ended up veering away from that and going off in another less savory direction.

Good, though, and worth reading, but it left me disappointed.