All Comments on 'Airport Layover'

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BazzzBazzzabout 17 years ago
Nice build up

You didn't just rush into the sex. You let us get seduced like the sultry Jean. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Erotic Story

Erotic seduction of Jean with Elaine added as a bonus. a "ballsie" beginning nice "surprise" ending. The "Big Guys" sort of spoil it for the "average guys".

Nice writing.

Hank

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