All Comments on 'Beauty's Journal Excerpt 1'

By far the best story I have read in a LONG time. It was sooo beautiful. I wanted, no craved to be Beauty, in your story. Cant wait for another one! LOVED IT!

I am not a big one for BDSM, but your story was enchanting. The style was unusual and worked rather well. The broken sentences in your story convey the urgency and quiet erotic desperation of your character better than full sentences would have. Looking forward to your next one.

Very hot!7