All Comments on 'Him Inside of Me'

Great first time story

This was an interesting short piece. You managed to make it very vivid, without being overly graphic. It was a good, and very erotic story.

Thanks.

personally ithought it was beautiful how you described there reactions too one anoter, i really wished you woud have finished. how you described the yearning and almost agrivating need to make love, was very relatable unlike some authors who make those feelings so unrealistic. i enjoyed your story maby you should try and get published.

And it doesn't hurt her? Is that even possible? I've never met a woman who didn't feel pain the first time they'd done the deed.... 🤔

I still think about that night🙂

Excellent! I'd like to read the whole book. :)