by Big Gunz
Stop attacking the writers to make up for your own lack of imagination and lack of maturity. If you do not like the type of stories on this site I suggest you go elsewhere. You're gutless and pathetic!
to commentors who want to think for others.each has his own taste,so enjoy your type of stories and let others enjoy theirs.stop telling people what they are and you no nothing about them.if you was so smart you wouldn't need this for your jolly.the writer is responible for what he writes,good or bad.i think two wrongs don't may a right.if hubby finds out co worker in deep shit behind a whore out for revenge.
The premise was ok but I thought it was supposed to provide more than an excuse for men who hate women, yet still need them. Somehow, the wife is "a slut" and "a whore", but then what is the husband?
So far, the revenge is all in her mind, since husband doesn't know what's happening. It's just a series of porn-film plots until that happens.
Not much storyline nor character development here. The author's prose is aceptable but nothing special. As a stroke story, it's decent but as fiction, it's not terribly good. Kari likes the lifestyle her husband provides but dislikes him so she plays around. The story's predictable, and the marriage will break up when he finds a younger trophy wife to take her place as there's nothing to keep them together. It's sad really.
Alvaron says it all. This is not much of a story so far as who cares what these two people are doing. If it is just a stroke story then maybe some will like it, but it isn’t that hot I fear.<p>PT
AWESOME!!! Don't listen to a few morons get you down. Great stuff.