All Comments on 'One Good Reason'

god almighty what a repulsive little shit this guy is. Its all about him. Why was he fat? b/c HIS feeling were hurt... why was his feeling constantly being shit upon? b/c he was fat.

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even when he met STACY he did NOT want to ask her out b/c it the possible rejection would Hurt his feelings... and he was not willing to risk his own image about himself

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Look at how he cheers. He is not cheering or happy that Stacy thought he was nice or cute... he is cheering that the gets to stick in someone else's face.! This loser is a real good candidate to be the the next VT shooter.

Great story! Very well written, and one I can relate to as well. Have you ever imagined what dating your dream girl in HS would have meant for your self confidence? I sure do.

To the above comment-leaver. Don't be a troll. You know perfectly well this story isn't about being fat, or rubbing it in someone's face (well, unless you're an idiot). It's about learning that you've lost the love of your life before you even loved her, and it's about knowing you could have changed it all if you just had the courage.

Bravo!

you get everything you want in life, and that you can finally be happy with yourself

It was spell-checked, the grammar was okay, and sentences/paragraphs correctly formed for the most part. On the other hand, it was only marginally well done so far as content. The logic was confused and the "stream of consciousness" discussion roamed around like a drunken sailor. Maybe I'll get an "E" for this comment? It's at least as good as this "essay."

You really put yourself out there. Good for you!

But will it get exposure? Of course - this site is worldwide. Useful? To you yes. To others if they read between the lines into what could be if they can believe in themselves as a start and build on it as the writer will.<P>

Then there is harry with the sensitivity of a brick and similar density. Barrow someones else's shoes harry baby - walk a mile if you can - grow up if you can - not every one is as talented or deserving as you nor able to communicate as well but they are likely not as ugly as you - at least on the inside - sometimes you deserve your mouth and no amount of telling it like it is gets you off as being anything close to human - sensitivity-wise. Grow outward harry - it could be a good thing for those around you.<P>

Writer - good job and venting - now use the inertia to your advantage. A good man may dig ditches if he has discipline and standards he lives by in his work and life. Measurements of self are most always more exacting than by others - especially in retrospect and while expectations should be high don't make them insurmountable enough to guarantee self serving failure. Taint good mind food.<P>

Onward and upward writer - have some fun and it can happen.<P>

Best Regards and Good Fortune

Right above me is the most disgusting piece of writing I've ever seen, and it's a comment from Harry in VA about this story. Harry, you missed the point. The shooter at VT took no accountability for his life. He just thought everyone deserved to die because of his pain. This author isn't REMOTELY like him. He's realized that all of the pain he felt was caused by children, but those children grow up and become real people, kind and considerate people, like Stacy. The author in this story missed out on a chance with a woman he cared deeply for because HE allowed his perception of life to be so molded by those around him. Now he realizes that HE has the power to change things, he holds himself accountable for his past, and he's posting this for others to here. Instead of murdering innocents, he's trying to change his life for the better.

Kudos to you, MDB913. Good luck to you.

What a wonderfull piece of work, eloquent, funny with dry humor, a great message..well done bro!

Don't you dare ever doubt your talent as a writer..again good work..*smiles*

I enjoyed your story. This was not only really well written, but honest too, that's rare on this site! To write like this you have to have a great personality, and girls (non-bitches at least) are suckers for a great personality. There is totally someone out there for you.

You don't need an editor...you need a publisher.

Your style reminds me of my style, only (sniff) you are a better writer than me.

You just require some help with mechanics is all but if you are, indeed, only 21...I wish I could write like this when I was 21. I was too busy getting laid (sorry, no dig intended).

wow dude you really made a difference to me

i just want you to know that atleast some ones life has changed because of this

and that life is mine

So realistic and honest.

And doesnt know for what....or how to.....or an outcome. will he ever learn. TK U MLJ LV NV

We should all be gay.....

Nah I'm jockin but I seriously want to read more if the oppurtunity occurrs