Wow! I wish I could take part in adult battles! More, please!
THERE MUST BE CONTINUATIONS OF THIS TALE. This has humor, plenty of teasing and is freakin' hot. Continue on.
More, More, MORE!
I am an avid fan of pokemon games and your stories have taken them to a new height, please keep them coming
Where's the rest? You just going to give up the story, are you? Going to be like other authors who right great stories and then just up and stop writing them? Well, are ya? I sure as hell hope you don't.
While I gave up following Pokeman years ago, I do enjoy this story. Keep it going.
Is the first word that comes to mind. Your talent is considerable. I strongly recommend you consider continuing the series. I anxious to see where it will go.
such a good series keep writing
This series is awesome. Keep going!
Yea continue the series. I would like to read more.
Is this favorite sci fi show you mention babylon 5?
i like it very much :D
could you please consider adding another chapter? :)
DUDE WRITE MORE!!! You have got to write more this is perfect. No one could do it better. Keep up the good work.
amazing truely. Continue the story. PLEASE!
Please Please continue writing this is totally awesome. Even in an adult themed story you have still managed to capture many of the characters attributes and personality. I would really like to see a chapter 9-? It would be awesome if you added some of the main characters from the main story to have an 'encounter' with Lynx or if you made it that he could travel to other regions by train or boat. Anyhow this is an amazing and well written series. Worth getting published if possible.
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