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by MungoParkIII

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AngelineAngelinealmost 17 years ago
Love the wordplay!

The alliteration, the assonance, the double meanings and yet clear imagery. A good piece of writing and fun to read (fox in socks for grownups). :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Enjoyed your poem this morning...

Also, it has been mentioned in the Poetry Feeback and Discussion forum: http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=23117090#post23117090

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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Angeline has got it right — this is such a fun piece to read with all the creative wordplay employed. Enjoyed going back to read it aloud more than once; makes it a hit in my book.

MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailalmost 17 years ago
Oh it sounds like

WickedEve on a Friday bender

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
ITS EMPTY, ITS FULL

its available for carting or carrying, TK U MLJ LV NV

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