by MungoParkIII
The alliteration, the assonance, the double meanings and yet clear imagery. A good piece of writing and fun to read (fox in socks for grownups). :)
Also, it has been mentioned in the Poetry Feeback and Discussion forum: http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=23117090#post23117090
Angeline has got it right — this is such a fun piece to read with all the creative wordplay employed. Enjoyed going back to read it aloud more than once; makes it a hit in my book.