All Comments on 'The Maharani Pt. 01'

I read the third part recently and was so impressed that found out this first part.

He is a master story-teller and I recommend all and sundry to go through this and enjoy his style, apart from the theme and the flow.

His command of the language is enviable.

May he continue to enthral the readers, as only he can do, apart from another master storyteller 'Fantasy123'

May their tribe grow to fulfill the readers' fantacies.

Mind bogglingly good

Paragon , U are very very good

you have talent in other forms of lit as well

please explore them , and I mean it a your ardent fan

Between submission 2 and 3 , such was the long wait that i thought you left it at that

But you came back and closed it 1 - 4

Very very good

I think i am Parvati and Mahmud is fucking me I am wet my pussy want Mahmud For fucking just like Parvati.

Regards

Bhavna

Mind bogglingly good

Paragon , U are very very good

Excellent erotic writing! Keep writing!

Very well written

This is a very good erotic love-making story of Rani Parvati and Sultan Mahmud embedded in history. It's very well narrated.