All Comments on 'Accidental First Time Ch. 03'

I am really enjoying these stories. The shyness of both adds so much to the loving intimacy. Very nicely written.

Easy to read; almost lyrical. Love your style.

You should stray from the second person narrative if you mention names in dialog. I find it makes it sound clumsy. Otherwise, you are very well articulated in your writing.

I really liked the shy inexperience you were able transmit in your story. I look forward to the next installment, even tho they are becoming more accustomed to their new relationship and more comfortable with it. Keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed reading all parts of your story. It was very well written, showing real caring and sensitivity by both as they learned about each other. Please keep on writing and I am looking forward to reading further chapters as their relationship grows.

Please give us the next installment of this wonderful story!

Nice