All Comments on 'Gold Card Ch. 01'

This looks like the beginning of a real good time with this Gold card... Where can I get one of those?

I hope to see more of this story.

Quite a creative story!! Many turns this can have with more chapters, but this was different! Thanks

God knows what she would have done for a Platinum Card !!

It is rare to find offbeat, original thinking in any fiction - including literotica. Thanks for an enjoyable and sexy reading experience. I saw that Chapter 2 has already been posted, but I wanted to read Chapter 1 first.

Fun "fringe benefits" with the credit card, although most credit cards have the "Gold" card as the "basic" card, with Platinum & Titanium being the suped-up versions. That's just a nitpick - loved the story!!

This really is first rate. Clever concept, well written, punctuation and grammar great. That rare thing - a readable smut tale, tastefully told. Hope you keep up the standard ....

Julius