All Comments on 'The Retreat Ch. 05'

I didn't notice any flaws. I hope Nick and Jess both open up to each other and discuss what went wrong ten years ago. Obviously a huge misunderstanding of some kind, but until they clear that up, Nick is going to feel uncertain about Jess.

Terrific story! I can't wait to read more. Love the characters and I can't wait to find out what or who was responsible for the misunderstanding between them.

Great story! love it! Cant wait to find out what jess did to break nicks heart!? we already know what nick did! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks

please continue

This was fantastic! its well written and tender and the characters just come alive. its perfect.

Usually I love your stories, but I guess I just don't care for Jess. She seems devious and misleading, trying to make a guy who says he doesn't want kids impregnate her. And having frequent unprotected sex right around ovulation is definitely trying for a pregnancy! She doesn't seem particularly funny or nice, just beautiful. You're a great writer; this one just isn't my favorite.

Another story of children playing at being adults. Communication is key you idiots.