All Comments on 'Was Intruder Unwelcome'

by rupanita

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Please write more

That was fabulous!!!

Please put more description and plot in it like the older stories! You are good.. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Awesome

Please continue to write more. a big fan!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Your end needs to be better

Rest is very erotic and good, but the intruder should have had a second go at the ass ( maybe ) and now that the husband knew who the intruder was, a second encounter and a better end would be befitting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

This story iz okay. Although it was pretty racist callin the African American man a negro. Thats a big ass no no. And also him being constantly referred to as "the black man" is a no no as well. Watch it you could offend people.

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