All Comments on 'Me, You, and Your Girlfriend'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not very descriptive

Sort of a slam, bam thank you mam! Need to take it slower and bring it along a little, a lot slower.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Needs more "fuck"

Seriously, even if you just wanted to create a quick-wank story, which I don't usually have a problem with, have your characters lay off the speed a bit. And try some other words instead of "fuck". Sorry for the anon, but not reg'd.

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 16 years ago
Good little Fantasy!

I enjoyed this! Keep up the good work!

MACOttMACOttover 13 years ago
Nice job

Very hot story, brings me back to college. ha. thanks for sharing.

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