All Comments on 'You Will Not Deny Me'

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sacrificedangelsacrificedangelabout 16 years ago
Nice!

Very nicely written! Flowed well, not too fast, and not overdone!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Perfect for the Reluctance side of this category

There are not enough of this type of story in this category - very nice story - could have been a little longer. I would enjoy reading more of the same or even another chapter - broadening her sexual knowledge

violetflowervioletflowerabout 16 years ago
Very good story

I really enjoyed this story, and agree with other reader there are not enough of this type of story. I hope you continue with additional chapters. Violetflower

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Google hymen

it'll tell you that the proof of a virgin's virginity is at the opening to the vagina and not inside. Beside that, very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Hot!

I love historical romances so i thoroughly enjoyed this. Very nicely done.

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantabout 16 years ago
Not quite so forgiving

Nice historical romance - but I am less forgiving than an earlier poster - the location of the hymen is - or shouldn't be - a mystery, but it seems that few writers get it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nicely written

I enjoyed this story very much. Historical Romance...can not beat em. Hope to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
From the writer

Thank you for all the feedback. It's my first submission and I am encouraged to continue the story. It should be available by mid April.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very nice and good

Very nice and good story. And exciting me...

Please, continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
HOT

Hi, really enjoyed the story, hot stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
SEQUAL!!

I keep returning to this hoping to find a sequel! It's has great potential and never fails to arouse me. Love the historical touch, please continue.

MrVdogMrVdogalmost 12 years ago
typical female, all that matters

is heat.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Fickle

This was an interesting story and a really interesting premise. However, I now see her character as extremely fickle. If her emotional attachment can leave that quickly, then she must be easier to sway and more fickle than most people

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Hello all. Thank you for your continued reading of my first story. I had lost my password and had not posted any new stories as a result. I am currently working on a few pieces, including a follow up to You Will Not Deny Me. Please stay tuned.

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