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Nice!
Very nicely written! Flowed well, not too fast, and not overdone!
Perfect for the Reluctance side of this category
There are not enough of this type of story in this category - very nice story - could have been a little longer. I would enjoy reading more of the same or even another chapter - broadening her sexual knowledge
Very good story
I really enjoyed this story, and agree with other reader there are not enough of this type of story. I hope you continue with additional chapters. Violetflower
Google hymen
it'll tell you that the proof of a virgin's virginity is at the opening to the vagina and not inside. Beside that, very well done.
Hot!
I love historical romances so i thoroughly enjoyed this. Very nicely done.
Not quite so forgiving
Nice historical romance - but I am less forgiving than an earlier poster - the location of the hymen is - or shouldn't be - a mystery, but it seems that few writers get it
Nicely written
I enjoyed this story very much. Historical Romance...can not beat em. Hope to read more!
From the writer
Thank you for all the feedback. It's my first submission and I am encouraged to continue the story. It should be available by mid April.
Very nice and good
Very nice and good story. And exciting me...
Please, continue!
HOT
Hi, really enjoyed the story, hot stuff!
SEQUAL!!
I keep returning to this hoping to find a sequel! It's has great potential and never fails to arouse me. Love the historical touch, please continue.
typical female, all that matters
is heat.
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