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You Will Not Deny Me

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by Anonymous

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by sacrificedangel03/10/08

Nice!

Very nicely written! Flowed well, not too fast, and not overdone!

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by Anonymous03/10/08

Perfect for the Reluctance side of this category

There are not enough of this type of story in this category - very nice story - could have been a little longer. I would enjoy reading more of the same or even another chapter - broadening her sexual knowledge

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by violetflower03/10/08

Very good story

I really enjoyed this story, and agree with other reader there are not enough of this type of story. I hope you continue with additional chapters. Violetflower

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by Anonymous03/10/08

Google hymen

it'll tell you that the proof of a virgin's virginity is at the opening to the vagina and not inside. Beside that, very well done.

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by Anonymous03/10/08

Hot!

I love historical romances so i thoroughly enjoyed this. Very nicely done.

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by H.H.Morant03/10/08

Not quite so forgiving

Nice historical romance - but I am less forgiving than an earlier poster - the location of the hymen is - or shouldn't be - a mystery, but it seems that few writers get it

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by Anonymous03/11/08

Nicely written

I enjoyed this story very much. Historical Romance...can not beat em. Hope to read more!

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by Anonymous03/28/08

From the writer

Thank you for all the feedback. It's my first submission and I am encouraged to continue the story. It should be available by mid April.

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by Anonymous04/18/09

Very nice and good

Very nice and good story. And exciting me...
Please, continue!

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by Anonymous11/30/09

HOT

Hi, really enjoyed the story, hot stuff!

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by Anonymous03/10/11

SEQUAL!!

I keep returning to this hoping to find a sequel! It's has great potential and never fails to arouse me. Love the historical touch, please continue.

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by MrVdog07/02/12

typical female, all that matters

is heat.

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