All Comments on 'Black Girl'

I liked the sensuality which coexisted here with the love that clearly came across...perhaps more like adoring.

A more romantically sensuous than hard edge erotic piece. I saw Eve's review on this and I see what she means about some spots needy a tweak. I think, for example, that in the next to last line that, "plant me deep" is almost predictable; I'd leave out the pronoun and just have it read, "plant deep," but that's just me.

Soft and warm but with the sizzle of passion underneath.

except for societies mores, please yourself, TK U MLJ LV NV

open her up and see whats inside, TK U MLJ LV NV