All Comments on 'First Night'

nice, warm and sensual. Good job for a first effort. Keep writing!

That was a very nice story. Gentle, loving and caring, and as sexy as hell! Nice to see a woman in charge of her pleasure and consideration of safe sex. A couple of typos, but hey, great story. If you ever need someone to check your spelling ...

Sweet, tender, sexy, and believable -- one of the best first-time stories I have read on this site. Clearly the work of a real writer. If this is really your first story, which I find difficult to believe, by all means do keep up the good work!

Excellent for a first story,Please continue writing.

I am in awe. Of your tender heart, your skill with words and feelings, your memory of things I believed happened in a tent in the mountains of Montana a long time ago... with a woman no longer here.

I will read every story of yours than I can find!

Thank you.

I loved the tenderness of your young virgin as she explored her first partner and dared to experiment with her own lustful needs. The way you handled the female point of view is nothing short of amazing. Such knowledge and understanding.

I like your style here. It was a pleasure to be part of such a moment