by mori07
I'm really liking the story but it just seems too rushed and it's lacking depth. Slow down the past a bit and the depth will deepen.
I hope you finish this story, you just need a beta reader. You have great talent.
I'm glad Michelle and Jae Hwa work through their differences. It's a good thing that Michelle worked up the confidence to tell Jae Hwa the truth. Hope you add more pages to chapter 2. And more chapters to this sweet interesting story.