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Tainted Arrangement

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by BigFtHunter07/12/08

Just wild

Don't know what else to say. Just wild. Nice touch. Glad I don't cheat. 100 for originality.

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by Anonymous07/12/08

good reading

I need a part two anad soon. Thanks for a good theme and well written. Please!!! part two soon and dond't let the hubby be a wimp.

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by thebullet07/12/08

a bit extreme

Well written story - extreme ending. I'm not one of those who believes infidelity on either side is grounds for the death penalty. Divorce, okay. Death? no. Why are so many mens' sense of self-worth tied into their wive's pussies? It's called a double standard. I've yet to see a story about a cheating husband where the readers call for the husband's balls. All of those stories about the husband being tied up and forced to watch the wife cheat for revenge: the readers always take the side of the husband. It's called a double standard.

For the guy demanding chapter 2: what, are you eager to hear about her debilitation and death? What more could the author add that hasn't already been added?

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by Anonymous07/12/08

Nice Twist

Interesting, you hid the twist well. The only problem is, she should have taken him in the ass. AIDS is not like a lot of SDTs, if you're not "kinky", a one time event is not likely to spread it.

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by Anonymous07/12/08

like it

that's a great way to scare the living hell out of someone. does it serve the purpose? fuck yeah! sometimes, divorce just isnt good enough. a little payback goes a long way.

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by Anonymous07/12/08

It was just to scare her.

And an excellent way to do it. I got the feeling at the end of the story that husband was just telling his wife a story to momemtarily scare her as revenge before he divorces her. And his friend went along with the plan. His friend does not have AIDS, but the wife does not know that. This was the perfect revenge to show his wife what could happen if she kept up her current life-style.

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by SleeplessinMD07/12/08

Excellent!

AIDS is not HIV so even if the wife gets AIDS that does not meean that she will die. What it does mean is that the lying and cheating will end since she will have to confess her activities outside the marriage. Oh, she will no doubt have fewer sex partners in the future. I really do not know why some readers are upset by the husband's revenge. Recall she was fucking other cheating husband bareback specifically so she would not get a sexually transmitted disease (i.e., by picking newly cheating husbands). The husband recorded the deed so he could leave the dead marriage with no fuss. Thanks for an excellent story!
SleeplessinMD

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by bruce2207/12/08

Scary Stuff

Well written but I do believe that anyone who goes around
barebacking in this day and age is asking for trouble!
Fascinating how ladies night out gives so many problems to both partners!

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by Anonymous07/12/08

Purely devious, loved it.

I've read some revenge stories but this one is totally twisted. Part of me hopes that he is HIV positive and the bitch deserves it and another part loves the mind fuck if he ain't. I didn't see it coming and usually you can with these stories. Good work!

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by Anonymous07/12/08

Playing rough..

For those optimists who believe that Harry isn't infected, look at all of the hints earlier in the story. Harry talks about the 'big step' John is taking having him (Harry) do his wife. John is afraid to shake Harry's hand. When they are taping, he mentions that it looks like Harry hasn't had any for awhile either, i.e. everyone is afraid to get what he's got. So, perhaps wifey will give up the life style, but John isn't going to be getting any from her soon either — since it takes some time for HIV to show up (granted, as one reader stated, if it does.) Slick, nasty, and satisfying.

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by Djmcljr07/12/08

suprise...suprise

Good read. Kept my attention. Extreme...yes, but when a person is backed into a corner, there is no mercy. Sorry for her? "Sympathy" is a word found in the dictionary between "shit" and "syphilis". LOL Best Regards, Don

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by Anonymous07/12/08

Oh, What A Story

Yes, this was a short story and it will need a follow up, but it was a very good story and an excellent ending. As Geroge Prepard from the "A TEAM" would say at the end of each show,"I love it when a plan comes together." lol

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by JADED_ONE196907/12/08

Nice idea!

What is it they say about revenge? A Dish best served cold? Well this was certainly cold.

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by Ken Nitsua07/12/08

Scary

Well-written, but pretty twisted. What kind of husband, no matter how wronged, would contemplate infecting his wife with a deadly disease, or even letting her think he would do so? This marriage is SO over. Best, Ken

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by digdaddyrich07/12/08

damn good idea

the problem is that it isn't legal,but a hell of a good thought.I know a few women, that it would be just the right justice.Oh well it's just a good fantasy. Rich

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by Anonymous07/13/08

Turn About

Ultimately fair since she may have brought home something for him already.

Consequentially balanced - sorta

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by Anonymous07/13/08

Absolutely perfect - hope the wimp authors read...

Great quick story that deserves an exceptional rating & place on this site. Stupid bitch deserves the anguish, pain and suffering - in reality we hope she truly get the disease. Additionally, we hope the recent wimp-husband authors take note on how to write a "great story" and ensuring that a decent set of consequences are put into play.

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by Anonymous07/13/08

Best story of its kind

Too bad Harry doesn't have leprosy too. (Don't do the crime if you can't do the time.)

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by Anonymous07/13/08

Best story of its kind

Too bad Harry doesn't have leprosy too. (Don't do the crime if you can't do the time.)

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by Anonymous07/13/08

so

it was a joke, just to "punish" her, simply because she's been fucking around and for the last a couple months she didn't want to give him blow jobs?

"you see, darlin', I took him to the clinic, and he's HIV positive."

what kind of a stupid, gibberish story is that? this is no revenge; it's just mindless stupidity.

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by Anonymous07/16/08

Actually this is excellent retribution for a wife

that has for all intents and purposes ended her marriage. When sexual acts between partners end a marriage contract is ended. When on partner goes out and fucks others the marriage contract is ended. "BigDaddy"something, hiding behind a nick said it was illegal. May I ask what was illegal? The wife going out fucking around, adultry, yes that is illegal in many places. The video taping, well one of the persons taping the actions set it up and agreed, maybe under federal laws it was legal. Asking a guy to fuck you wife and cum inside her? Well she did have first the option not to be fucked, second the option to make him use a condom, and third the option to have been a good and loving wife who does not betray her marriage. Maybe you meant having a guy you know has AIDS fuck her? Well that could be illegal, a hired killer if you will. We all know you cant cure AIDS, you can slow it down, but you cant stop it. In some states spitting on someone can be considered attempted murder, since people with AIDS have been known to spit on people to try and infect them; ie: infected prisoners spitting in guards ears and mouths. Actually the woman got exactly what she would have eventually gotten anyway have unprotected bareback sex with strangers picked up in a bar. It is a fitting and proper retribution for a slut/whore wife that does not love her husband and cheats on him openly.

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by Anonymous07/29/08

justice ?

Some would beat up or kill their wives and/or lovers, some would just walk away, this husband plays it very cool. Extreme revenge for just cheating ? Maybe so, but that's neglecting the fact that she pick's up strangers and goes bare back. That's exposing him to the same risk. It's all her doing, she can only blame herself if she becomes positive or worse, or else as is said so many times here, she brought it all on herself. So joke or not, she has painted herself in a corner. If she comes clean (ha ha) and confesses : end of marriage. If she is positive, she will have to tell anayway or he will be told by the clinic : end of marriage. If it were a joke, he still has all he needs to end the marriga on his own terms. Lucky him if she hasn't given him something. And to those who think he is crap for taking this revenge, just think yourself in his place and tell us what you would be doing, how civilized you would behave. G.Belgium

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by Anonymous08/21/08

nice revenge

It was the best revenge a man can take from his cheating wife. well done. nice story. really liked it. that;s the best revenge for infidelity.

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by Alvaron5308/21/08

It's tainted, all right.

This tale is perverted, not erotic, that's for sure. If you've known anyone who suffers from HIV, you'd know better than to cheer. It simply shows that you're small-minded and mean-spirited. Divorce is your remedy for infidelity, not voluntary manslaughter. John committed a crime, by the way, since he knew ahead of time that Harry was infected with a deadly disease. If it's proved in court, he'll get to enjoy the intimate company of large men in close quarters in prison. I've been told that extreme rectal stretching is quite painful.

The writing in the story is tolerable, but the characters are loathsome. Harry's vile because as a victim himself he should know how stupid it is to propagate the disease. John's nothing more than unconvicted felon. His wife has no morals. None of these people would I consider it a privilege to know. Without anything positive about them, why would I care what happens to them? The answer, of course, is that I don't, and that's where the author's characterizations fail.

I suppose in a fantastic masturbatory way loved by teenaged boys, the plot has some value. If you get off on hurting on someone else, you'll like this story. Sadism isn't my thing, so reading about someone else deliberately causing the death of another isn't erotic nor enjoyable. It has all the same appeal of reading about the death camps of the Holocaust. Thank you for your effort.

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by fregen09/28/08

Just maybe

Ashley already has AIDS. After all her desire for unprotected sex and avoiding STDs by only screwing around with married men isn't exactly foolproof as the story points out. If she and John are actually still having sex (and not just hand jobs) she is intentially putting him at risk also.

Actually I have to agree that Harry probably does have AIDS. And John's revenge is rather vicious. Too bad she didn't divorce him BEFORE fooling around. She may get lucky with a one time exposure but the mental trauma either way is going to be severe for 6 months.


Thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous12/29/08

just a scare...

no one seems to realize that pissibly since the husband set it up... that the hiv thing is a ruse... what better way to "silently cure" infidelity than to scare it away... she will be so relived to find out she is clean that she will never risk it again. Or one would hope.

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by Anonymous09/14/09

options

1st option- that was a little game that was played on her. if she did not touch john before, its not like she will suddenly want him. 2nd option- harry was positive and she was exposed. in one breath, it could be said that he extracted long term revenge, but given her behavior, she was exposed by her conduct. it was over with john, in any case

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by Anonymous04/07/10

Harry had to be HIV Positive

Old story has generated quite a debate as to whether Harry was or was not HIV Positive. Unless the author never considered it as a possibility, if Harry was clean why would he agree to go bareback with a strange woman who was KNOWN to be a serial cheater going repeatedly to bars to pickup strange men who may OR MAY NOT, like Harry, be clean. Therefore, unless Harry was a "F***ing Retard," Harry would have not had unprotected sex with the slut unless he was ALREADY INFECTED.

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by Anonymous04/05/11

He Was..........

..................HIV Positive.

Hubby set it up to get rid of her, she fucked him over, cucked him and showed him 'No Respect'.

No one needs a bitch like this, when and how did she become a Loving Wife converted to a slut/cheat?

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